One of the most important and well
known moves in academic writing is defining the focus of your argument as
unique to your stance. This outlines the scope of your argument, and while it
can be utilized in a multitude of ways, it most likely it resembles the
template “For the purposes of this argument, X is ….” This simple yet effective
mood can be done in scientific research, moderated debate, and most often in
academic writing. Amanda Putnam executes this move quite well in her piece when
she defines what “queer” will mean for the purposes of her argument. But this
technique becomes quite ineffective and flawed, when she develops ideas that
are meant to parallel the ideas of queer and transgenderism, and out of lack of
thought or ease of effort, just doesn’t.
Putnam does not only argue that
Disney villains who she defines as queer in appearance or manner are demonizing
transgenderism. She goes on to argue that the heroes and heroines of those same
films are perpetuating stereotypical heterosexual relationships. I instantly
found flaw in her argument. If she is going to defines queerness as anything
weird or out of the ordinary and use it as evidence of transgenderism, a term
that defines gender, she most also define homosexuality or heterosexuality in
relationship to her argument, terms that define sexual orientation.
Because Putnam describes
heterosexuality and transgenderism as being paralleled for children in Disney
films, and does not distinguish that one is meant to represent a gender identification
and the other is used to represent sexuality I immediately wanted to disregard
her argument. I believe some of her points were great as standalone ideas and
thoughts. Yes, Disney princesses fill the popular standard for feminine roles,
but this I believe would define their gender identity as “cis” or relating to
and claiming the gender that they are born, and does not automatically
designate them as heterosexual. Are Disney princesses and princes also a
picture of heteronormative pop culture of course? But because she never defines
any of these simple terms, she seems to easily misrepresent the LGBTQ
community. It is similar to when she called Scuttle a crane, only this time it
is vital to her credibility.
Has Putnam claimed to be an
activist on LGBTQ rights and representation? Of course not. But by writing an
academic piece, and taking part in the academic conversation, she has assumed
to some extent a role of authority on the topic. That’s what academic writing
is essentially. We develop an argument but studying text or “They Say” and then
we present it to readers who are under the assumption that since we cited all
of these scholarly sources and had an article reviewed by our peers, we know
what we’re talking about, to some extent.
However, as a reader I do not know
if Putnam is aware of the idea that gender is separate from reality, an idea
that is integral to the LGBTQ community. An if she is going to write a paper
under the umbrella topic “queer” as defined by her, I hope to assume she is
familiar with some ideas of the LGBTQ community.
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